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Way to go, Winston! What a great way kick-off to the book! And, though I haven't had the time to read them yet, the premises behind the runners-ups' stories are wonderful too. What a great amount of creative imagination this little contest has gathered together. Great stuff, Brian. Happy writing, everyone!

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Thank you for the kind words, Chris! I haven't had time to check out everyone's stories yet either. It's nice that this has doubled as a sort of curation of stories available on Substack.

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What an honor to be recognized alongside such talented writers here on Substack. Thank you so much Brian Reindel, Meg Oolders, and Tom Pendergast for hosting and judging.

I love Simon's work with Tales from the Triverse, and I'm looking forward to reading and following everyone's stories. I was feeling a bit down this week, and this was an unexpected pick-me-up. Thanks for all of the support!

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I'm so glad to hear that, Winston, and I hope you're feeling better soon. The community at large is lucky to have you among our ranks, and I'm excited to see how your novel develops!

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What Brian said.

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Jun 7, 2023Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

Congrats Winston, great work. Hope this keeps the spirits lifted :)

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Jun 7, 2023Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

I can’t wait to read through all of these stories! Thanks so much for hosting and boosting fiction here Brian!

Congrats Winston! I know how much effort you’ve put into this story. I can’t wait to read it.

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Thank you so much, Shaina!

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Huge congratulations, Winston! Best thing about this (other than being mentioned alongside such fantastic writers, which is a huge honour) is getting an immediate boost to my reading list. Can't wait to dive into these projects.

Thanks, Lunar squad!

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Way to go Winston! Congrats!

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Thank you so much, Ben! THE SHIELD OF LOCKSLEY looks so epic. I love King Arthur stories.

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Jun 7, 2023Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

Congrats Winston, and also congrats Brian for using the award-granting process as a way to open up a discussion of what makes writing worth reading.

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It's definitely taught me a thing or two!

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Thanks, Tom! And you're right. I love that aspect because it helps me gauge reader expectations for the book as a whole by understanding what worked well in the first chapter. Great job, Brian!

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I like this award precisely because it's recognising and examining a form that (these days, at least) is fairly unique to online writing. I've been doing this for years now, but I'm still figuring out what makes for a good prose serial opening.

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Congratulations Winston! And well done to everyone who took part.

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Thank you, Stephen! I love your design work on Knighfall and Sonrise. I'm eager to dive into your world.

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Thank you! Hope you enjoy when you do.

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Jun 7, 2023Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

Congrats, Winston!!!! (What’s the appropriate celebratory cultural signal in your world?)

And thank you, Brian and Meg, for putting so much of your time and consideration into this! I enjoyed this whole process so much and thrilled to have such a fun way to discover other great fiction writers here!

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Thank you, Rachel.

Good question! Hmmm. I know that if I had chromopathy, my eyes would be a bright yellow/gold right now from happiness.

In terms of celebratory signals, it would have to involve the sun in some way like reflecting sunlight into a central location to overload a sol-stone, or maybe exploding a sol-stone in the air to simulate the sun during the night. I'm not sure! You've given something to consider. :)

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Jun 7, 2023Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

Congratulations, Winston! So well deserved

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Thank you, Cameron! You're awesome. I'm excited to read The Dancer.

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Bravo, Winston!

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Thank you, Redd!

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Jun 7, 2023Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

Nice job, Winston!

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Thank you, T.D. McIntosh!

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Jun 7, 2023Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

Congrats Winston.

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Thank you, William! I'm eager to get more into Battles Beneath the Stars soon.

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Congrats, Winston! And thank you to Brian and the review team. Great to see some many fiction writers on Substack!

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